Feedback

Well, we showed our video to our class mates and collected feedback - positive as negative.
However is the negative feedback, not necessarily negative, it is important to give our video the last improvement and try to make it perfect.
Things we have to improve are to:

- Make the first seconds a still picture and put in the titles (name of the video/ our name)

- Delete a shot due to double appearance

- edit the Flashback on the beat

- editing everything on 4 bar edit

- Add more shots to complete the story line (Stan/Tori)

- Get our couple getting closer

- Make a proper fade out

If all this is done, we will head to the ancillary task!

Hi, this is our second rough cut,, we have developed it a lot compered to the last rough cut, so sit back and enjoy.

from Will and Freddy

Hello there from Freddy’s Will

Well after a very long week we have finally finished our second rough cut, we are both very happy with the out come so far, there were several problems we incanted whilst editing this was manly getting each shot on the dance beat but we have done it. The editing was and still is grate fun and it really has been a learning curve, in the way of using new editing techniques compared to last year.

So the necked step is to show the video to our pears and get there feed back and see what they like and what they don’t like about it, it is vital to get this information as it is the only way in which we can improve and develop our move to the necked level. Along with this we both need to start on our ancillary task, which we will get stuck in to some point this week.

From William Heynes